Resolved Question: Can anyone please read my article for my schools' newspaper and tell me what you think?

4 December 2011, 11:17 pm

I know there's some punctuation errors and stuff like that but anyways this article is about China,and i'm trying to persuade people into vacationing over there. Is there anything I need to improve or change?Thanks in advance! Welcome to China! Looking for a nice and exciting place to vacation outside of Japan? China is a must visit! With over 1.3 billion citizens and millions of tourists each year,China is one of the most popular places to visit. Why's it so popular to visit? Because there's so much to do and see. China has so much history which traces back to millions of years ago. One of the many major tourist sites is the Forbidden City. The Forbidden City is located in Beijing,also a well known city in China. It was built about 500 years ago,and the world's largest surviving palace. It's a very wonderful experience to go actually see this exhibit in person. It's nothing compared to what you'd see and read online. Other cities such as Shanghai,Tianjin,and Shenyang are also very popular,so make sure you take a visit to all these cities as well. Lets not also forget the world famous Great Wall of China. Anyone who comes to visit China is missing out if you don't at least go and see it,since walking through the whole thing can be tiring. There's also a variety of good Chinese cuisine. There's several types of Chinese cuisines. It's categorized as ''Eight Regional Cuisines.'' or ''Eight Cuisines of China''.Such as : Hui,Yu,Min,Xian,Su,Lu,Chuan,and Zhe. You could also find everyone favorite sweet and sour chicken and dumplings. The best time to go to China would all depend on you and which season you'd prefer. Summer: very hot,and sometimes rain, Winter: really cold,snow and a bit sunny,Spring: flowers are blooming,and Fall: getting cold(be sure to bring a jacket!) China is well worth your time,be sure to come visit if you're looking for a new and exciting adventure!... Read More »